
I like the simple nights
where we sit back
leaning partly on soft cushions and
each other
and watch a moving picture
almost as moving as the rhythm of our heartbeats
beating together as if to say
WE ARE UNITED
our limbs becoming indistinguishable in a
tangled mess
those nights where the company of one another is simply
enough –
now that’s what I call a
moving picture.
Love this! It has a comfortable tone, much like the feeling I think you’re describing!
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I’m glad you feel that way, that was exactly what I was trying to achieve! x
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And this I call a lovely written portrayal of something beautiful.
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Reading this made me smile, thank you!
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Your writing made me smile too. It was lovely.
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This is an awesome piece Fiona! Because it’s laid back and relaxed, all the while still evoking feeling and emotion too. Great work 😊
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Thanks so much Kaitlyn, glad you enjoyed it! That was exactly what I was going for 😊
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Love how chilled out and relaxing the picture you’re portraying is! xx
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Happy you liked it, Mia! xx
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So lovley. xx
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*lovely
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Thank you Natalie! xx
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GREAT STUFF! I READ THIS LIKE, TWICE.
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THANKS DUDE. Happy you enjoyed it!
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A moving verse to describe this moving picture!
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❤
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Beautiful as always 💙x
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Naww thanks Chlo xx
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Beautiful 💖
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❤
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Absolutely brilliant, this brought tears to my eyes when i read this, you have an amazing ability to speak directly to people’s hearts, which isn’t common by any stretch so keep on writing
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Thank you, I honestly don’t know what to say – this is truly flattering feedback, feedback every writer is honored to receive. Will do, I hope you’ll do the same!
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Love this!!! Would love for you to check out my blog. Hope your like it, Love your content. Jess xoxoxo
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