Interesting way if writing ‘simple’, I literally read it like a meme.
A thing I don’t get is has the poet closed their eyes, and then they see the stars and the blackness? I just sort of interpreted it like that cos it seemed to make sense and was the most poetic
Thank you so much! I feel like “black and white” has a bad reputation but truthfully, I find it quite refreshing from time to time, to forget how complex the world can be, even just for a few seconds.
Interesting way if writing ‘simple’, I literally read it like a meme.
A thing I don’t get is has the poet closed their eyes, and then they see the stars and the blackness? I just sort of interpreted it like that cos it seemed to make sense and was the most poetic
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That was the goal! And you understood what I was trying to convey perfectly – indeed, the poet is the one to close their eyes.
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Simplicity can certainly be refreshing. I like this short, simple piece.
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I agree. Sometimes black and white is a nice break from everything. Thank you mags!
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Ganz gern, Fiona!
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💙✨💙✨💙✨
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this is so beautiful!
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aw thank you so much x
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Your words are always so powerful, you manage to say so much with so few words!
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That’s so sweet of you to write, thank you so much for your kind words Alys!
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This is really beautiful! I love the simplicity of black and white, and all the links and metaphors you can make about life with the colours. x
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Thank you so much! I feel like “black and white” has a bad reputation but truthfully, I find it quite refreshing from time to time, to forget how complex the world can be, even just for a few seconds.
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All of us sometimes need an escape. You expressed that by just closing one’s eyes
Loved the writing ❤️
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Thank you so much, you expressed what I was trying to say perfectly!
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So beautiful thanks for sharing xx
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Thank you Amelia! x
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