“flecks of unspoken truth” – that beautifully describes the ending of so many relationships. The many things that people don’t end up saying, whether they’re scared, shy, worried..
A beautiful poem, Fiona. Also have to mention the line “sun set in fast motion”. That’s literally how I’ve been feeling lately, everything just seems to be going much faster than what it should be. Where did 2020 go?
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts on this piece, Laura! It really put a smile on my face βΊοΈ. So true, 2020 has been somewhat of a blur for me too. It all just went by so fast, especially during lockdown. And LOL – me replying almost 3 months after you posted this comment should be taken as a sign of that hahaha
This was so beautiful and soft, Fiona. I love your writing so, so much.
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Thank you Arshia! Happy you enjoyed reading β¨
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“flecks of unspoken truth” – that beautifully describes the ending of so many relationships. The many things that people don’t end up saying, whether they’re scared, shy, worried..
A beautiful poem, Fiona. Also have to mention the line “sun set in fast motion”. That’s literally how I’ve been feeling lately, everything just seems to be going much faster than what it should be. Where did 2020 go?
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Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts on this piece, Laura! It really put a smile on my face βΊοΈ. So true, 2020 has been somewhat of a blur for me too. It all just went by so fast, especially during lockdown. And LOL – me replying almost 3 months after you posted this comment should be taken as a sign of that hahaha
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As they say, better late than never π It feels like I went to sleep on January 1st and awoke to October – that’s how fast the year is going. x
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Haha, honestly same π Hope you’re doing well btw x
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Simple and touching.
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Thank you, mags. π
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Gerne, Fiona.
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π simply adore.
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β€οΈβ€οΈ! Thank you Chloe, hope you’re well x
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Love this! What a beautiful poem xx
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Thank you so much, Hannah! Happy you liked it xx
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Beautifully written as always, Fiona x
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Thanks girl! So glad you enjoyed reading x
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