
Loosely swaying to the rythym of today
unfamiliar hands
strong but gently wrapping themselves around my chords
getting to know me
guiding me
grounding me
giving me
a beat in my step
a pulse through my veines
directing an orchestral performance
out of our control
larger than anything we ever knew
sweeping us up in the chorus of life.
Nice comparison; beautifully written.
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Thank you, I’m happy you think so
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Great analogy!
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Aw thanks mags!
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My pleasure, Fiona.
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The rhythm that guides us. ❤ ❤ ❤ < A well penned verse. ❤ Love the positivity it exudes. 🙂 🙂
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Thank you! I thought it was about time I wrote about something positive for once, the majority of my other poems are very dark. 🙂 x
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Welcome. ☺
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This is so amazing! Good job!
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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Beautiful .xx
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❤
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WOAH love this!!
Ljoy xo
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Thanks Lorelie, long time no talk! x
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This is so beautiful and uplifting, please keep sharing your poetry with the world!
Alys
https://alysjournals.wordpress.com/
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Aww thank you Alys! That’s so sweet. x
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Beautifully penned.
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I’m happy you think so!
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Em, if you get time do go through my work as well .
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i loved the title! and ofc the poetry!
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Happy to hear that, thank you Srijan!
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