
She was never the type of girl
to let it slide when her feelings
were trampled on
so it came as a surprise to everyone that
this strong-willed female,
decisive in her manner,
her steps always so self-assured,
echoing down the hallways as if to convey
that she was a force
to be reckoned with,
had given herself up
by simply walking into a tank full
of hungry sharks
and letting them eat her alive
the clicking of her heels
finally coming
to a
halt.
This shows that even the people who appear the most confident and act the happiest, also have their bad days, they’re used to hiding it but one day it’ll be revealed. Great post xx
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You nailed it! I think it’s inevitable that even the strongest of us, or at least those who appear to be so, will slip up sometimes or in extreme cases just break down completely. Thanks xx
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What a powerful, shocking piece!
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Thank you, mags!
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Ganz gern, Fiona.
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everyone has a breaking point, no matter how strong we may appear. it is part of what ties us together as humans–we all FEEL, more deeply than even we ourselves can possibly know. beautiful piece, fiona. I always adore your poetry, and the meaning behind it gives me something to aspire to ❤ xx
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Couldn’t have said that any more beautifully. Thank you so much, K, your words flatter me deeply and definitely put a smile on an otherwise pretty dull day! ❤️ xx
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💛 breathtaking as always. thank you
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No, thank YOU! x
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I love this so so much. Even the “strongest” people can reach their breaking points and, when they do, everyone’s surprised… your poetry is always brilliant! xx
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Happy to hear you do! You summed up what I was trying to convey perfectly, couldn’t have done it better myself. Thank you Mia! xx
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This is such amazing writing. Love it xx
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Thank you so much! x
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Just read this piece. It’s tragic and SO real how she gives up an walks willingly into the shark filled tank.
All of us have at atleast oce in our lives wanted to give up on something, sitiations, moments, people…
Loved it!
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I literally just stumbled upon your comment – – THANK YOU SO MUCH! Your words are so kind, I am happy that this piece affected you in the way it did.
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