someone once told me
that I should
use less words
in my writing
but what is a garden without its plants
a book without its pages
a body without its skeleton?
impression upon impression
each one holds a different weight
yet I have always found that the heavier
the point
the more lightweight my words
for it is the things that stay with us
for no apparent reason
that take the most explaining
Ah, this is so good! You write so well!
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Thank you for your kind comment, Clara! I’m happy you enjoyed this x
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Wow, you are fantastic. Kudos!
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Thanks Cordelia! Glad you enjoyed this.
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💙💙💙
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I have never been one for poetry, but you may just be changing some opinions out here.
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I am beyond flattered, thank you so much!
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Beautiful! xx
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Thanks priya xx
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This is such a good poem omgosh! xx
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Why thank you, Hannah! xx
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“for it is the things that stay with us
for no apparent reason
that take the most explaining”
These lines are so overwhelming. Something inside me felt like it fit into this poem. Such heavy emotion conveyed in such light words. I love how you’ve shown what you’re talking about through this little piece. I loved it so much, I’m saving this (first time I’ve ever saved any piece of writing).
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I’m glad this was able to speak to you. I struggled a long time with trying to express what I was trying to convey and it took so long for something so simple… Ah. The irony.
And MY OH MY I feel like when I was 4 and won a trophy for tap dancing! Me? This? SAVED?
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Also, form without matter is such an Aristotelian concept, something that he talks about so non-poetically, and then there’s this poem with such a fitting yet unique take, the philosophy major in me is shaking.
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Oh my god, THANK YOU for understanding the basis of this poem! You always get what I am trying to say *jumps up and down really enthusiastically*. And of course, my awkward self thanks you for your amazing compliment – coming from you it means a lot.
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